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Tuesday 23rd June
Good Morning!
So my chickens don't realise that Mrs T has discovered the sunflower heads on her
they're supposed to live outside! biggest sunflowers have been cut clean off! No
evidence has been left at the scene!
Write to Mrs T telling her who you think stole them!
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Literacy
Today, edit your story.
If possible ask someone else to read it and then go through the checklist. Have you checked:
- Does it make sense? Does your story flow?
- Are the full stops and captial letters in the right places?
- Have you included fronted adverbials with commas?
- Are there interesting descriptions about how the character felt? and about what they saw and heard?
- Are your spelings correct?
Now, think, is there one paragraph you could write even better? Is there something you could included to make it more interesting?
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